Rough Cut Feedback

                                                                       

Front Cover

 

Positive:

• Quirky, Striking image
• Strong colour scheme

To be improved:

• Need to clarify genre, what is it?
• More focus on music
• Could improve fonts
• Dig main feature

Contents Page

Positive:

• Inclusion of front cover
• Features montage
• Chunky page numbers
• Recycle details etc

To be improved:

• Too table like
• Use less text

Double Page Spread

Positive:

• Details, some layout elements

To be improved:

• Needs style variation
• Photo quality
• Needs 3 columns, more text needed